Boura Naono - Hinata
TRANSLATED SCRIPT OF HINATA v.0.2 [bn_hinata[shi-ran].html]
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CONTENTS
I. Usage notes.
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further.
II. Information
Information about the original Japanese
title, as well as originators of this file.
III. Project Script (with commentary)
The translation of Hinata, originally written in
Japanese by Boura Naono.
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II. INFORMATION
TITLE: Hinata - "Sunny Day"
AUTHOR/ILLUSTRATOR: Boura Naono
ORIGINALLY PUBLISHED: Reijin Selection, Spring Special '98.
TANKOUBON PUBLISHING: "Hohoemi Nichijou" ("Wishing our
Happy Lucky Days") as the 1st story ISBN: 00170-2-179210
SHORT INTRODUCTION:
A boy scarred from parental abuse finds safety
and love in the peaceful life of a retired photographer and
his newborn.
-cirrus
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japanese text translation: cirrus
text transcription: justynka
additional text setting: cibo
text release date: 05/03/03
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III. PROJECT SCRIPT - HINATA
p4
Kakeru: *Ever since I was born, there's been only darkness around me*
*Nothing but despair*
p5
Kakeru: *And it'll always be this way, as long as I'm alive*
Kakeru: Waaagh!
Huff! Huff!
[What's a baby doing here?]
p6
Man: Ruri!
Rurika! I told you not to run off!
Rurika!
[You certainly look happy]
I'm sorry if she's been a bother.
Kakeru: ...
Man: Your face...
p7
Man: Ah! Wait!
Ruri: Uwaaa!
Uwaaa!
Man: If it's not too much trouble, would you mind stopping by my
house?
p8
Man: Where did you get those bruises?
Kakeru: ...
Man: What about your family?
Man: [That must be the reason...]
May I ask your name?
Kakeru: Sure... It's Akamine Kakeru.
p9
Man: I'm Konomi Shouchi and this is my daughter, Rurika.
If it'd help, you can stay here for as long as you like.
It's just the two of us.
Kakeru: I don't want to be a bother...
Shouichi: You don't want to go home, right?
Shouichi: Are you a student?
Kakeru: No... I used to work.
Shouichi: [You quit?]
I got it!
I can see that she's taken a liking to you, so...
Would you work as my baby-sitter ?
p10
Kakeru: *Shouichi-san manages a small photo studio in his home.*
*Right after giving birth to Rurika, his wife fell ill and
died. For now, he's letting me take care of house and Rurika.*
*Until now, I'd always thought this kind of life could only
be a lie.*
[There, there]
Ruri: Goo!
Kakeru: [Heheh...]
*I never knew such a warm place could exist*
p11
Distant voice: ...kun
Kakeru-kun?
Kakeru-kun!!
Kakeru: Oh!
Shouichi: Sorry, but I kept calling you...
Kakeru: I'm sorry.
I can't hear out of this ear...
Shouichi: Were you born with that?
Kakeru: My father... When he hit me...
Shouichi: And this burn?
p12
Kakeru: Yes... But it doesn't hurt anymore.
It just won't disappear.
I'm sorry... I know it's ugly. That's what they told me, so I
try not to let people see it...
*Dammit! Shouichi-san saw it!*
Shouichi: You don't need to apologize.
It's not your fault.
p13
Ruri: Goo
Kakeru: [Alright! Let's take a nap!]
*It's so peaceful*
p14
Kakeru: What is this? They're not books...
Ah!
Kakeru: Photos!?
[Why are they in boxes?]
*They're all nude!!* ('sweatdrop')
*They're all of Shouichi-san and his wife...*
p15
Kakeru: *His wife must've taken this one... Ruri's so small!*
*They're all such happy pictures...*
[Wha...!?]
p16
Kakeru: *Why did he take pictures of them having sex together?*
*I gotta put these back!*
[Oh man!]
*Shouichi-san...*
*What happened to you?...*
[What is this...?]
[My body's burning up...!]
p17
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun?
What's wrong? ........Oh.
Kakeru: Waaah!
Shouichi: You must've been shocked that they were all nude, eh?
[Sorry.]
[It's been a while since I've looked on them...]
I used to be a photographer a long time ago, you know...
After I quit, I only took pictures of my wife.
[Ha ha ha]
Did you get excited?
You're so young!
p18
Shouichi: Get going. You know where the bathroom is, right?
[No way around it.]
[I'll put Ruri to bed.]
Kakeru: Huh? Why do I have to go to the bathroom?
Oh! You mean Ruri!
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun... Don't have to deal with it?
Kakeru: With what?
Shouichi: Erm...
[How do I put this?] ('sweatdrop')
Do you know about sex... or masturbation?
Kakeru: !
p19
Kakeru: I've never done that before... So, I don't know...
Shouichi: [But you know the words.]
[You're 17, right?]
Haven't any friends or girls told you about it?
Kakeru: I... I don't have any friends.
...and I'm not good with girls.
Shouichi: Then... Should I teach you how?
p20
Shouichi: Just kidding.
[Ha ha ha]
Almost dinner time. How about you start cleaning up, okay?
Kakeru: W-would you...?
Kakeru: Mm!
p21
Kakeru: Nn!
Ngh!
Shouichi: See?
Doesn't it feel good when I do this?
Kakeru: Ah!
Shouichi: Don't hold back.
Kakeru: Ah!
Nn!
*What really felt good was Shouichi-san's fingers, and voice,
and warmth...*
Haa!
*It was the first time I knew the humans could be warm.*
p22
Kakeru: Hey! Spit that out this instant!
[You can't eat everything!]
Shouichi: *It's already been two weeks since he came into my home*
*Little by little, he's begun to show me his smile*
Ruri: Hnnn!
Buu!
Kakeru: Shouichi-san!
Shouichi: ['heart']
*He's not afraid when I touch him anymore*
[You two are just the same!]
Are you cold ?
Kakeru: [No, we're okay]
Shouichi: *I remember what it's like to love someone again*
p23
Kakeru: Nn! No... more! Shouichi-san!
Let go, please!
Shouichi: Are you going to come?
Kakeru: Yaa...! N... no, that's not what I mean!
Shouichi: [Oh!]
Kakeru: Uh...
P-please, let me do it to you, too...
p24
Shouichi: You don't have to push yourself.
[Heheh]
['heart']
You should save it for someone you really love.
Kakeru: But...!
Shouichi: It's not something you do out of sense of responsibility.
[How adorable he is...]
Kakeru: I love you, Shouichi-san!
Shouichi: Huh?
Kakeru: S-so...!
p25
Memory of the father: [You're so dirty, I can't stand the look of you!
You disgust me!]
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun?
Kakeru: I...
Please forgive me!
I'm sorry, please just forget about it!
[What was I...?]
I won't say it again...
I'm sorry...
p26
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun
[How many times do I have to tell you?]
You don't have to apologize for a single thing.
Kakeru: ...nn.
p27
Shouichi: What would you like me to do to you? What do you want? Tell
me.
I'll do anything for you.
Kakeru: In the pictures...
I want you to do to me what you did with your wife...
I know I'm a guy, and I'm not your wife, and with this scars,
I'm ugly, but...
[I want you to touch me...]
Kakeru: Nn...
p28
Shouichi: Try to relax.
Kakeru: Mmph! Ah... No... Aah!
Aah!
Nnah!
Sho-- Shouichi-san...!
p29
Kakeru: [Haa]
My body... It feels so hot... Is this normal?
Shouichi: ['heartbeat']
*I'm old enough to be his father. Not to mention he's a
boy...*
Kakeru: Aah!
Nn!
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun... You're so beautiful.
*Why...*
*Why do i feel for him so lovingly?*
Kakeru: Nn!
p30
Kakeru: Aah!
Aah!!
Shouichi: Let me see your face.
Kakeru: ...
Shou...ichi...san...!
p31
Kakeru: (lots of Aah!! ;) )
Shouichi: *Why?...*
p32
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun...?
Kakeru: [Whee! Whee!]
Shouichi: [Ruri's laughing...]('sweatdrop')
Kakeru: Shouichi-san...
Shouichi: *Ah... That reminds me...*
Kakeru-kun, there is something I'd want to discuss with you.
*My home is bustling with life just like it used to...*
p33
Shouichi: I hope you don't mind my asking, but...
Kakeru: ?
Shouichi: Would you live here with us from now on?
Kakeru: Huh?
Shouichi: Erm... I mean, Ruri and I would love to have you stay with
us... Would that be alright?
p34
One week later
Memory of Shouichi: Your things? I'll buy you anything you need.
Kakeru: [And he bought me all my clothes]
*That's what he told me, but...*
*I'm sure mother and father are out of the house for now,
so...*
*I'll just slip in and take what I need.*
*All that's left is my textbook from grade school.*
p35
Kakeru: !
Father: Where the fuck have you been for the last month !?
'Cuz you didn't bring home any money, I couldn't even go to the
pachinko! (pachinko - Japanese gambling game)
Kakeru: Father... !?
Father: What? You think we're gonna let you wander off again after you
finally came back !?
Is this the thanks we get for raising you, you damn punk!
Kakeru: [Mother...]
Mother: Maybe he banged some girl and now he has to support her.
Horny little bastard.
p36
Mother: You never did know when you were being used...
Kakeru: Shouichi-san's not like that!!
Father: "Shouichi", ech ?
Kakeru: Ow!
Father: You're tellin' me you've been getting fucked by a man?!
Of all things, now I have a damn fag son!
I'm not raisin' no filthy brat like you! Dirty bastard!
Mother: Oh, darling... About that Shouichi guy...
p37
Mother: How much do you think he was paying him?...
Kakeru: *I'll kill them...*
Father: Yeah, I wonder.
Kakeru: *Right now...*
p38
Kakeru: [Shouichi-san... I'm so sorry...]
p39
Father: What's on your hand, huh!?
This punk's fucked around enough!
Kakeru: [I knew it... There will only be darkness around me.]
Father: I'll shut him up, once and for all...!
Kakeru: *I can't move...*
p40
(distand voices)
Kakeru: [What's happening...?]
Voice: Taking him? Give me a break!
Kakeru: [It's so warm...]
Voice: You think I'd hand over my son to a pervert like you!?
Shouichi: Son?
Parents do not have the right to brandish their authority
however they see fit.
Do you think anyone would be able to forgive you, after
seeing his ear, burns and scars?
Father: Th... That's none of your business!
p41
Shouichi: Yes, actually it is.
Over the past month Kakeru-kun has become someone that will
always be part of my home.
No matter what you say, I will be taking him back.
... Unless you'd like to take this to court? It'd be very
beneficial for me to do that.
p42
Kakeru: I'm sorry, Shouichi-san...
Shouichi: You apologize too much.
Kakeru: ... ('sweatdrop')
How did you know where I lived...?
Shouichi: [Well...]
When I accepted you into my family, I had to go through some
paper-work. That's when I found out.
Kakeru: Thank you.
Shouichi: Come on, now.
We'd better hurry home. Ruri hasn't stopped crying since you
left \.
Shouichi: *And as for me...*
p43
Shouichi: *I couldn't do anything when you where gone...*
Kakeru: ...Nn!
Shouichi: You're hurt pretty badly... Maybe we shouldn't.
[Do you really want to do it?]('sweatdrop')
Kakeru: I'll be... fine... Ah!
Do it... Please...
p44
Shouichi: ...
Kakeru: Fu...nn!
Haa!... Nn!
Shouichi: Tell me if it hurts.
Kakeru: A... Alright.
Shouichi: [Here we go.]
Kakeru: *Ah!*
*Shouichi is...*
Haa.... Aah!
Ah!
Shouichi: Kakeru-kun... You smell like the sun.
[Probably because you're in the garden so much with Ruri...]
p45
Shouichi: You smell wonderful.
Kakeru: Nn! Aah!
Aah!
Ah!...Nn!
Shouichi: I love you so much... Kakeru-kun.
Kakeru: *It's so hot...!*
p46
Kakeru: Shouichi-san...!
Ah! Aah!
p47
Shouichi: [You okay?]
Kakeru: [I'm okay]
Shouichi-san...
I think that... The smell came from you and Ruri...
Shouichi: Oh?
Kakeru: Well!
B-because you're both my sunshine...
Shouichi: [So cute!]('heart')
Kakeru-kun! ('heart')
Kakeru/Shouichi: Oh?
Kakeru: Rurika!? You bit through it!? ('sweatdrops')
[But you have only two teeth!]
Shouichi: That's amazing! And she's only 8 months old, too!
[Good baby!]
Kakeru: [Hmph!]
Shouichi: [Ha ha ha!]
Kakeru: [From now on, there will only be the endless sunny days for
me.]
END